Critique of animation needed..

Hi:
       A few weeks ago I got a job to create an animation for a site that sells Poser content,mocap for3d max,  3d models etc.This is my first real world gig since graduating design school  and I am hoping the client digs it enough to act as a reference. This is a rough and not the final and I wanted some constructive criticism before presenting the finished animation to the client. Keep in mind this is my first gig, so dont be too cruel.
Its in flash 8 SWF format. Any feedback wouldbe appreciated..
Thanks.......

Heres the link to the animation...
www.eclip3d.com/bin/Advanced_Weapons_Pack_for_Poser_divx.html

Are you selling mocap data?

Why is it so long? I got boored a quarter in.

I agree, I had no idea what was being sold!!  I did notice the mocap and was thinking, I wonder what was said to the mocap person, "heres a gun, what ever you do, dont change the position of your hands on the gun!!"
LOL
But yeah it was long and didnt convey the product at all.
You should look at maybe 30-45secs and less info to read on the screen.  Just show the key points.  Also show the product logo at the end or somewhere there abouts.

nick

In between your animation sequences 
Place text support   describing what you sell